My alternative to Daily Oral Language

I am always amazed when I look at my blog stats and find that people are still looking at my daily oral language post from last August.  When I used Daily Oral Language with my 5th graders, I used the Great Source book.  The students grew bored with it quickly and it didn’t seem to matter what tricks I tried to keep them interested, they were bored.  I’ll admit, this could have been because I was bored with it myself.  I felt like I was betraying my own beliefs about writing.  I believe that if we want students to improve their grammar and writing skills they should be given opportunities to use grammar and practice writing.  This daily activity just seemed like a waste of valuable writing time.   I admit, it was nice to have a daily activity that they could get started on when they walked in the door.  It was great “busy work” that gave me time to take attendance. I felt guilty for relying on “busy work” though so I had to find an alternative. What is my alternative you ask?  In my classroom we call it ‘first thoughts’.  It started out as “journal time” but became ‘first thoughts’ when I explained to students that I just wanted them to write their thoughts, the first things that cam to mind. I said, “just write your first thoughts” and it stuck. When I first started this, students were welcomed everyday with a note from me on the board.  They would read my note and write a response in their journal.  This was working pretty well, but soon they became a little bored with my notes.  They weren’t always interested in the things I was interested in.  One day I had a student groan, “Why do we have to answer your questions? Why can’t we ask our own questions?” Desperate for something that would get my students interested in writing, I decided to give it a try. While they responded to the question I had written on the board, I went to my computer and typed up a form students could use to let me know what questions they wanted to ask their classmates. I printed a few and students began filling them out. The next day, and every day after, when my students came into the room, they were greeted with questions from their classmates. They come into the room, read the board and begin writing their first thoughts. The first ten minutes of class are spent reading, writing, and thinking. What more can a teacher ask for?

7 Responses to “My alternative to Daily Oral Language”

  1. hey2blondie Says:

    What can a teacher ask for? The form of course! :) What did your students keep their first thoughts in? How often did you grade it? What did you grade for?

  2. maxiscool Says:

    I enjoyed reading about the evolution of your opening routine from DOL to “first thoughts.” I’m always trying to come up with something that will get studets off to a productive start when the bell rings.

  3. hey2blondie Says:

    Where did you get ideas for your first thoughts?

  4. aredden Says:

    When I was writing the messages, I just wrote what I was thinking about at the time. It might be a question about the story we had read the day before or about something going on like a ballgame, track meet or other school event. My prinicpal started every day with a quote or thought of the day. Sometimes I wrote about that. I just wrote what I was thinking and asked them about things that I was curious about.

  5. anne Says:

    What a wonderful post. We have been struggling with DOL this year..my son who loves to write creative pieces doesn’t do well on DOL. I think it is because there is no real flow to it. Did you help your students edit their writings or did you have another grammar lesson you used?

  6. aredden Says:

    I helped them edit their writing. I used their writing to lead me to lessons that I knew needed to be reviewed or introduced. If I noticed that several students were making similar mistakes, I would work with them in small groups. We would talk about what I had noticed and turn to the language handbook found in the back of our literature book to help us correct the errors. I did a lot of individual and small group instruction based on the errors I saw students making in their journals. Does this answer your question?

  7. debrennersmith Says:

    Have you looked at Jeff Anderson’s work? He publishes with Stenhouse. I posted some ideas on my website on alternatives to DOL that might interest you.
    http://www.debrennersmith.com

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